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Signed-off-by: Nick Cameron <[email protected]>

src/part-guide/adv-async-await.md

@@ -24,28 +24,28 @@ Blocking and cancellation are important to keep in mind when programming with as
 
 We say a thread (note we're talking about OS threads here, not async tasks) is blocked when it can't make any progress. That's usually because it is waiting for the OS to complete a task on its behalf (usually I/O). Importantly, while a thread is blocked, the OS knows not to schedule it so that other threads can make progress. This is fine in a multithreaded program because it lets other threads make progress while the blocked thread is waiting. However, in an async program, there are other tasks which should be scheduled on the same OS thread, but the OS doesn't know about those and keeps the whole thread waiting. This means that rather than the single task waiting for its I/O to complete (which is fine), many tasks have to wait (which is not fine).
 
-We'll talk soon about non-blocking/async I/O. For now, just know that non-blocking I/O is I/O which the async runtime knows about and so will only block the task which is waiting for it, not the whole thread. It is very important to only use non-blocking I/O from an async task, never blocking I/O (which is the only kind provided in Rust's standard library).
+We'll talk soon about non-blocking/async I/O. For now, just know that non-blocking I/O is I/O which the async runtime knows about and so will only the current task will wait, the thread will not be blocked. It is very important to only use non-blocking I/O from an async task, never blocking I/O (which is the only kind provided in Rust's standard library).
 
 ### Blocking computation
 
-You can also block the thread by doing computation (this is not quite the same as blocking IO, since the OS is not involved, but the effect is similar). If you have long-running computation (with or without blocking IO) without yielding control to the runtime, then that task will never give the scheduler a chance to schedule other tasks. Remember that async programming uses cooperative multitasking? Here a task is not cooperating, so other tasks won't get a chance to get work done. We'll discuss ways to mitigate this later.
+You can also block the thread by doing computation (this is not quite the same as blocking I/O, since the OS is not involved, but the effect is similar). If you have a long-running computation (with or without blocking I/O) without yielding control to the runtime, then that task will never give the runtime's scheduler a chance to schedule other tasks. Remember that async programming uses cooperative multitasking. Here a task is not cooperating, so other tasks won't get a chance to get work done. We'll discuss ways to mitigate this later.
 
 There are many other ways to block a whole thread, and we'll come back to blocking several times in this guide.
 
 ### Cancellation
 
-Cancellation means stopping a future (or task) from executing. Since in Rust, futures must be driven forward by an external force (like the async runtime), if a future is no longer driven forward then it will not execute any more. If a future is dropped (remember, a future is just a plain old Rust object), then it can never make any more progress and is cancelled.
+Cancellation means stopping a future (or task) from executing. Since in Rust, futures must be driven forward by an external force (like the async runtime), if a future is no longer driven forward then it will not execute any more. If a future is dropped (remember, a future is just a plain old Rust object), then it can never make any more progress and is canceled.
 
 Cancellation can be initiated in a few ways:
 
 - Calling [`abort`](https://docs.rs/tokio/latest/tokio/task/struct.JoinHandle.html#method.abort) on a task's 'JoinHandle' (or an `AbortHandle`).
-- Via a [`CancellationToken`](https://docs.rs/tokio-util/latest/tokio_util/sync/struct.CancellationToken.html) (which requires the future being cancelled to notice the token and cooperatively cancel itself).
+- Via a [`CancellationToken`](https://docs.rs/tokio-util/latest/tokio_util/sync/struct.CancellationToken.html) (which requires the future being canceled to notice the token and cooperatively cancel itself).
 - Implicitly, by a function or macro like [`select`](https://docs.rs/tokio/latest/tokio/macro.select.html).
 - By simply dropping a future if you own it.
 
 The first two are specific to Tokio, though most runtimes provide similar facilities. The second requires cooperation of the future being canceled, but the others do not. In these other cases, the canceled future will get no notification of cancellation and no opportunity to clean up (besides its destructor). Note that even if a future has a cancellation token, it can still be canceled via the other methods which won't trigger the cancellation token.
 
-From the perspective of writing async code (in async functions, blocks, futures, etc.), the code might stop executing at any `await` (including hidden ones in macros) and never start again. In order for your code to be correct (specifically to be *cancellation safe*), it must never leave any data in an inconsistent state at any await point.
+From the perspective of writing async code (in async functions, blocks, futures, etc.), the code might stop executing at any `await` (including hidden ones in macros) and never start again. In order for your code to be correct (specifically to be *cancellation safe*), it must work correctly whether it completes normally or whether it terminates at any await point.
 
 An example of how this can go wrong is if an async function reads data into an internal buffer, then awaits the next datum. If reading the data is destructive (i.e., cannot be re-read from the original source) and the async function is canceled, then the internal buffer will be dropped, and the data in it will be lost.
 
@@ -72,9 +72,9 @@ let s2 = async {
 
 If we were to execute this snippet, `s1` would be a string which could be printed, but `s2` would be a future; `question()` would not have been called. To print `s2`, we first have to `s2.await`.
 
-An async block is the simplest way to create a future, and the simplest way to create an async context for deferred work.
+An async block is the simplest way to start an async context and create a future. It is commonly used to create small futures which are only used in one place.
 
-Unfortunately, control flow with async blocks is a little quirky. Because an async block creates a future rather than straightforwardly executing, it behaves more like a function than a regular block with respect to control flow. `break` and `continue` cannot go 'through' an async block like they can with regular blocks, instead you have to use `return`:
+Unfortunately, control flow with async blocks is a little quirky. Because an async block creates a future rather than straightforwardly executing, it behaves more like a function than a regular block with respect to control flow. `break` and `continue` cannot go 'through' an async block like they can with regular blocks; instead you have to use `return`:
 
 ```rust,norun
 loop {
@@ -90,14 +90,15 @@ loop {
             // not ok
             // continue;
 
-            // ok - continues with the next execution of the `loop`
+            // ok - continues with the next execution of the `loop`, though note that if there was
+            // code in the loop after the async block that would be executed.
             return;
         }
     }.await
 }
 ```
 
-To implement `break` you would need to test the value of the block.
+To implement `break` you would need to test the value of the block (a common idiom is to use [`ControlFlow`](https://doc.rust-lang.org/std/ops/enum.ControlFlow.html) for the value of the block, which also allows use of `?`).
 
 Likewise, `?` inside an async block will terminate execution of the future in the presence of an error, causing the `await`ed block to take the value of the error, but won't exit the surrounding function (like `?` in a regular block would). You'll need another `?` after `await` for that:
 
@@ -109,7 +110,7 @@ async {
 }.await?
 ```
 
-Annoyingly, this often confuses the compiler since (unlike functions) the 'return' type of an async block is not explicitly stated. You'll probably need to add some type annotations on variables or use turbofish types to make this work, e.g., `Ok::<_, MyError>(())` instead of `Ok(())` in the above example.
+Annoyingly, this often confuses the compiler since (unlike functions) the 'return' type of an async block is not explicitly stated. You'll probably need to add some type annotations on variables or use turbofished types to make this work, e.g., `Ok::<_, MyError>(())` instead of `Ok(())` in the above example.
 
 A function which returns an async block is pretty similar to an async function. Writing `async fn foo() -> ... { ... }` is roughly equivalent to `fn foo() -> ... { async { ... } }`. In fact, from the caller's perspective they are equivalent, and changing from one form to the other is not a breaking change. Furthermore, you can override one with the other when implementing an async trait (see below). However, you do have to adjust the type, making the `Future` explicit in the async block version: `async fn foo() -> Foo` becomes `fn foo() -> impl Future<Output = Foo>` (you might also need to make other bounds explicit, e.g., `Send` and `'static`).