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<section id="csprd02">
<title>Tracking of changes in response to the 2nd Public Review</title>
<para>This section tracks major changes made to this specification compared to the Committee
Specification Draft 02 / Public Review Draft 02 <ulink
url="http://docs.oasis-open.org/xliff/xliff-core/v2.1/csprd02/xliff-core-v2.1-csprd02.html"
>http://docs.oasis-open.org/xliff/xliff-core/v2.1/csprd02/xliff-core-v2.1-csprd02.html</ulink>.
This subsequent Public Review took place from 10th February 2017 until 24th February
2017.</para>
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<para>Major changes were made in the ITS Module and validation artifacts in response to
Comment/Issues <ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-5">https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-5</ulink> and most importantly <ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-9"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-9</ulink> and its child issues:
<ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-6"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-6</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-18"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-18</ulink>, and <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-19"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-19</ulink>. </para>
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<para>Major changes were made in the Change Tracking Module and validation artifacts in
response to Comment/Issue <ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-4">https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-4</ulink></para>
</listitem>
<para>This section tracks major changes made to this specification compared to the Committee
Specification Draft 02 <ulink
url="&previous-loc;/&name;-&pstage;.pdf"
>&previous-loc;/&name;-&pstage;.pdf</ulink>.
The second Public Review took place from 31st January 2024 until 29th February 2024.</para>
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<listitem>
<para>Clarifications to Core with Advanced Validation impact, non-of which were
normative changes were provided in response to Comments/Issues:
<ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-10">https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-10</ulink>,
<ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-11">https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-11</ulink>,
<ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-12">https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-12</ulink>,
<ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-13">https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-13</ulink>,
<ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-14">https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-14</ulink>
<para>
A method for constructing fragment identification strings has been added to the specification
(GitHub issue <ulink url="https://github.com/oasis-tcs/lexidma/issues/97">97</ulink>).
</para>
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<para>Material clarification with Advanced Validation Impact was provided for the
Translation Candidate Module in response to Issue <ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-20">https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-20</ulink>.</para>
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<para>The Change Tracking Module has been demoted to an Extension and the update of the
Change Tracking Module has been postponed for XLIFF 2.2 in response to the
Comment/Issue <ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-32"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-32</ulink>. This radical move
obsoleted the dependent Comments/Issues: <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-22"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-21</ulink>
<ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-22"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-22</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-22"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-30</ulink>, and <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-44"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-44</ulink>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Major bugfix of the core XML Schema has been made in response to Comment/Issue
<ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-46"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-46</ulink>. The core xsd now
enforces the <code>xs:language</code> type on the <code>srcLang</code> and
<code>trgLang</code> attributes.</para>
<para> Consistency has been introduced to the use of <code>&lt;text&gt;</code> child
elements in the XML serialisation. (GitHub issue <ulink
url="https://github.com/oasis-tcs/lexidma/issues/72">72</ulink>). </para>
</listitem>

<listitem>
<para>Major fix to the NVDL Schema has been made in response to Comment/Issue <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-38"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-38</ulink>.</para>
<para>
Clarifications have been added on how whitespace should be handled,
both at the level of the data model and in the XML serialisation
(GitHub issue <ulink url="https://github.com/oasis-tcs/lexidma/issues/84">84</ulink>).
</para>
</listitem>

<listitem>
<para>Erroneous namespace, data type, and/or rules provisions have been fixed in the ITS
Module prose and validation artifacts in response to Comments/Issues: <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-33"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-33</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-34"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-34</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-34"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-35</ulink> and <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-45"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-45</ulink>.</para>
<para>
Several validation artifacts have been added to the specification, including
an XML schema and a JSON schema
(GitHub issue <ulink url="https://github.com/oasis-tcs/lexidma/issues/93">93</ulink>).
</para>
</listitem>

<listitem>
<para>Material changes have been made to the Locale Filter data category in the ITS
Module in response to Comment/Issue <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-43"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-43</ulink>.</para>
<para> A clarification has been added on element ordering in the XML serialisation
(GitHub issue <ulink url="https://github.com/oasis-tcs/lexidma/issues/117"
>117</ulink>). </para>
</listitem>

<listitem>
<para>Major editorial changes have been made in response to Comments/Issues: <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-23"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-23</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-24"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-24</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-37"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-37</ulink>, and <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-42"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-42</ulink>. </para>
<para>
A clarification has been added to the XML serialisation
on which elements can be the top-level elements in a DMLex-comformant XML document
(GitHub issue <ulink url="https://github.com/oasis-tcs/lexidma/issues/118">118</ulink>).
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Minor editorial changes have been made in response to Comments/Issues:
<ulink url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-26"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-26</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-28"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-28</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-31"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-31</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-36"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-36</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-39"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-39</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-40"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-40</ulink>, and <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-41"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-41</ulink>. </para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Trivial editorial changes have been made in response to Comments/Issues: <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-25"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-25</ulink>, <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-27"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-27</ulink>, and <ulink
url="https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-29"
>https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/XLIFF-29</ulink>. </para>
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