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@@ -12,19 +12,19 @@ <h2>{{articleTitle}}</h2>
          <figcaption>{{heroCaption}}</figcaption>
       </figure>
       <p>
-         Using only millimeters for length measurements has the nice advantage that you don't need
+         Using only millimeters for length measurements has the advantage that you don't need
          to specify units because everyone on a project knows that all lengths will be communicated
          in millimeters.&nbsp;
-         Sticking to exclusively millimeters, especially in engineering and manufacturing
+         Sticking exclusively to millimeters, especially in engineering and manufacturing
          environments, reduces ambiguity and saves time.&nbsp;
          Some call this practice the "Millimeter Standard" policy.&nbsp;
       </p>
       <p>
          If your shop has made the decision to go "Millimeter Standard", that's great.&nbsp;
-         However, "Millimeter Standard" in casual use can be rather cumbersome because of the
+         However, "Millimeter Standard" in casual use can be rather cumbersome due to the
          unwieldy number of digits.&nbsp;
          When headed to the local garden center to buy 20 meters of irrigation tubing, you probably
-         don't want to be burdened with the 5-digit number 20,000.&nbsp;
+         don't want to be burdened with a 5-digit number like 20,000.&nbsp;
       </p>
       <p>
          Most people find meters and centimeters quite practical for everyday measurements and only
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ <h2>{{articleTitle}}</h2>
       <p>
          Unfortunately, there are a number of vocal pseudo-experts out there Hell-bent on
          eradicating centimeters.&nbsp;
-         They consider centimeters unpure and unholy, but this stuborness impedes
+         They consider centimeters to be impure and unholy, but this stubbornness impedes
          metrication.&nbsp;
          Stay away from these pernicious crazies.&nbsp;
       </p>
@@ -61,9 +61,9 @@ <h2>Human Scale</h2>
       <table data-code-column=2 data-number-column=2>
          <thead><tr><th>Body Part</th><th>Ruler</th></tr></thead>
          <tbody>
-            <tr><td>Across your pinky fingernail</td>                             <td>1 cm</td></tr>
-            <tr><td>Across of your fist</td>                                      <td>10 cm</td></tr>
-            <tr><td>Ground to your belly button<br>(or waist if you're tall)</td> <td>100 cm</td></tr>
+            <tr><td>Across your pinky fingernail</td>                               <td>1 cm</td></tr>
+            <tr><td>Across your fist</td>                                           <td>10 cm</td></tr>
+            <tr><td>Ground to your belly button<br>(or hip line if you're tall)</td><td>100 cm</td></tr>
          </tbody>
       </table>
       <p>
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ <h2>Human Scale</h2>
    <section id=counterintuitive>
       <h2>Counterintuitive</h2>
       <p>
-         Beleive it or not, a regular metric tape measure is better for "Millimeter Standard"
+         Believe it or not, a regular metric tape measure is better for "Millimeter Standard"
          work than a specialized millimeter only tape measure.&nbsp;
       </p>
       <figure>
@@ -84,11 +84,10 @@ <h2>Counterintuitive</h2>
       <p>
          If you are measuring in millimeters on a regular metric tape measure, treat the numeric
          markers as the leading digits and the selected tick mark as the last digit.&nbsp;
-         For example, a reading of "7" concatenated with the 3rd tick mark means a measurement
+         For example, a reading of "7" extended to the 3rd tick mark means a measurement
          of 73 mm.&nbsp;
-         Rather than summing up the two components of the numbers, you're just gluing them
-         together.&nbsp;
-         This technique is cognitively faster because it involves no math.&nbsp;
+         Rather than summing up two numbers, you're just gluing them together.&nbsp;
+         This concatenation technique is cognitively faster because it involves no math.&nbsp;
       </p>
    </section>