Some followups and polish for the tutorial

tutorials/mastodon-toot-embed/index.md

@@ -6,24 +6,23 @@ excerpt: Build out an embeddable Mastodon post using just the url
 
 {% stub %}
 
-In this tutorial, we will walk through the process of creating a custom element that can be used to easily display
-Mastodon posts on any website or application.
+In this tutorial, we will walk through the process of creating a Web Component that can be used to display Mastodon
+posts on any website or application.
 
-Our aim will be to create a `<toot-embed>` element will allow users to share and display posts (sometimes called
-"toots") from the Mastodon social network, and will include features such as the ability to show or hide the user handle
-and avatar image, as well as the option to customize the appearance of the toot.
+Mastodon is a decentralized and open-source social network that allows users to share short posts, called "toots", and
+interact with other users on the network. It is similar to Twitter, but with a focus on privacy, freedom of speech, and
+community building.
+
+Our aim will be to create a <toot-embed> element that will allow users to share and display Mastodon posts on other
+websites or applications.
 
 Here's an example of a Mastodon toot embed. We'll be making something similar.
 
 <iframe src="https://fosstodon.org/@webcomponentsguide/109660552894549193/embed" class="mastodon-embed" style="max-width: 100%; border: 0" width="400" allowfullscreen="allowfullscreen"></iframe><script src="https://fosstodon.org/embed.js" async="async"></script>
 
 We will start by setting up the project files and dependencies, and then move on to defining the Mastodon toot embed
 element class, extending the HTMLElement class, and registering the element with the browser. We will also cover adding
-properties and methods to the element, using a shadow DOM for improved styling and separation of concerns, and adding
-interactivity to the element.
-
-Finally, we will look at integrating the Mastodon toot embed element with a real-world project, including tips for
-building and using the element in a production environment.
+properties and methods to the element and using a shadow DOM for improved styling.
 
 Throughout this tutorial, we will explore the various features and capabilities of Web Components, and how they can be
 used to build reusable and modular components for the web.

tutorials/mastodon-toot-embed/properties-and-methods.md

@@ -7,8 +7,9 @@ title: Fetching the data
 
 Now we can start fetching the data from the mastodon servers!
 
-We need to make sure that we have a valid URL to get the data from. We'll be using the `src` attribute to store the URL
-for the toot. Lets set up getters and setters for `src`.
+## Setting up the attribute setter and getter
+
+We'll be using the src attribute to store the URL for the toot. Let's set up getters and setters for src.
 
 ```js
 class TootEmbedElement extends HTMLElement {
@@ -22,110 +23,75 @@ class TootEmbedElement extends HTMLElement {
   }
   // ...
 
-  get src() {}
-  set src(value) {}
+  get src() {
+    const src = this.getAttribute("src")
+    if (!src) return ""
+
+    return src
+  }
+
+  set src(value) {
+    this.setAttribute("src", value)
+  }
 }
 
 TootEmbedElement.define()
 ```
 
-We want to do two things. Persist the `src` value to a `src` attribute on the element _and_ make sure that the URL isn't
-malformed.
+## Parsing the URL
 
-To make sure that the URL isn't malformed, we pass it through the URL constructor before returning the attribute value.
+To make sure that the URL is valid, we pass it through the URL constructor before returning the attribute value.
 
 ```js
 class TootEmbedElement extends HTMLElement {
   // ...
-  static define(tagName = "toot-embed") {
-    customElements.define(tagName, this)
-  }
-
-  connectedCallback() {
-    this.textContent = "Hello World!"
-  }
-  // ...
 
   get src() {
     const src = this.getAttribute("src")
     if (!src) return ""
 
+    // Check if the URL is valid
     return new URL(src, window.location.origin).toString()
   }
 }
 
 TootEmbedElement.define()
 ```
 
-And we can persist the value to an attribute using `setAttribute`:
+## Fetching the data
+
+Now we can use the fetch method to make a network request and display the data that we receive.
 
 ```js
 class TootEmbedElement extends HTMLElement {
   // ...
-  static define(tagName = "toot-embed") {
-    customElements.define(tagName, this)
-  }
-
-  connectedCallback() {
-    this.textContent = "Hello World!"
-  }
-
-  get src() {
-    const src = this.getAttribute("src")
-    if (!src) return ""
-
-    return new URL(src, window.location.origin).toString()
-  }
-  // ...
 
-  set src(value) {
-    this.setAttribute("src", value)
+  async load() {
+    const response = await fetch(this.src)
+    this.textContent = JSON.stringify(await response.json())
   }
 }
 
 TootEmbedElement.define()
 ```
 
-Now getting the data from the mastodon servers is a matter of using `fetch` to make a network request and display the
-data that we receive.
+Finally inside the connectedCallback method we use the load method to retrieve and display data from the src attribute
 
-```js
+```
 class TootEmbedElement extends HTMLElement {
   // ...
-  static define(tagName = "toot-embed") {
-    customElements.define(tagName, this)
-  }
-  // ...
-
   connectedCallback() {
     this.load()
   }
-
-  // ...
-  get src() {
-    const src = this.getAttribute("src")
-    if (!src) return ""
-
-    return new URL(src, window.location.origin).toString()
-  }
-
-  set src(value) {
-    this.setAttribute("src", value)
-  }
-  // ...
-
-  async load() {
-    const response = await fetch(this.src)
-    this.textContent = JSON.stringify(await response.json())
-  }
 }
 
 TootEmbedElement.define()
 ```
 
-Now we should be getting data! You should be seeing something like this in your browser:
+Now you should be getting data! You should be seeing something like this in your browser:
 
-![A browser screenshot showing the toot-embed component at it's current stage. The example page reads: "Here's an example toot: " followed by a dump of JSON data for a random Mastodon toot.](/images/tutorials/mastodon-toot-embed/fig2.png)
+A browser screenshot showing the toot-embed component at it's current stage. The example page reads: "Here's an example
+toot: " followed by a dump of JSON data for a random Mastodon toot.
 
-Yuk! Just a bunch of data spilled all over. We're gonna have to make this look prettier. In the next section we'll go
-over templating this data into a better looking component.
+Yuk! Just a bunch of data spilled all over. We're gonna have to make this look prettier. In the next section, we'll go
+over how to template this data into a better looking component.

tutorials/mastodon-toot-embed/rendering-the-data.md

@@ -70,7 +70,14 @@ You should now see the Mastodon toot data displayed in a more structured and pre
 ![A browser screenshot showing the toot-embed component at it's current stage. The example page reads: "Here's an example toot: " followed by a display of the Mastodon toot data including the avatar image, display name, and toot content.](/images/tutorials/mastodon-toot-embed/fig3.png)
 
 It's still not very good to look at! The image is way to big and the whole layout is a bit off. Let's add some
-rudimentary styles to the component in a `<style>` tag to make it a bit better.
+rudimentary styles to the component to make it a bit better.
+
+{% tip %}
+
+To support all modern browser make sure to provide a fallback approach for those browser which does not support the
+`CSSStyleSheet` API.
+
+{% endtip %}
 
 ```js
 const styles = new CSSStyleSheet()