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PC-570 wording changes following supplier feedback #259
PC-570 wording changes following supplier feedback #259
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There are a couple of bits to change based on compliance with GOV.UK style. Otherwise, this looks good.
help_to_heat/frontdoor/schemas.py
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"No, there is less than 270mm of insulation in my loft": _( | ||
"No, there is less than 270mm of insulation in my loft" | ||
"I have up to 100 mm of loft insulation": _( | ||
"I have up to 100 mm of loft insulation" |
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Please replace all uses of 100 mm
and 270 mm
throughout with 100mm
and 270mm
(no space).
This is the expected style in the GOV.UK style guide:
Measurements
Use numerals and spell out measurements at first mention.
Do not use a space between the numeral and abbreviated measurement: 3,500kg not 3,500 kg.
Abbreviating kilograms to kg is fine - you do not need to spell it out.
Use ‘grams’ (not ‘grammes’). For example: micrograms, milligrams.
If the measurement is more than one word, like kilometres per hour, then spell it out the first time it’s used with the abbreviation. From then on, abbreviate. If it’s only mentioned once, do not abbreviate.
Use Celsius for temperature: 37°C
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</legend> | ||
<p class="govuk-body"> | ||
{{_("A loft is fully insulated if it has more than 270mm (about 10-11 inches) of insulation covering the whole loft, usually laid on the 'floor' of the loft with one layer between the horizontal timbers and another layer going across them to bring the insulation up to the required level.")}} | ||
{{_("A loft is fully insulated if it has 270 mm (about 10-11 inches) of insulation covering the whole loft, usually laid on the 'floor' of the loft with one layer between the horizontal timber joists and another layer going across them to bring the insulation up to the required level.")}} |
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'floor'
should be ‘floor’
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Lots of the Welsh mixes between using '
and ’
for apostrophes. We should be using ’
.
Please can you replace these everywhere? We could take the opportunity to do it in all our strings.
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closes https://beisdigital.atlassian.net/browse/PC-570
a series of small wording changes & addition of extra paragraphs where needed
an example is given
old:
new:
new welsh: