Update blog/2023-11-29-mithril.md

Co-authored-by: olgahryniuk <[email protected]>

blog/2023-11-29-mithril.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ This week, the Mithril team released the initial version of the [Mithril client
 
 The team also introduced the initial version of Cardano/Mithril node communication enhancements,  implemented by TxPipe as part of the Catalyst project. They made progress in decentralizing Mithril networks, including testing the Mithril peer-to-peer (P2P) relay on a test network and conducting threat modeling and risk analysis for  P2P networking. Additionally, they started working on adapting the Mithril client library for WASM compilation and made progress in optimizing aggregator performance. 
 
-Finally, they fixed the verbosity level of the logs which was not accurate in most of the nodes, and they worked on troubleshooting some users.
+Finally, they fixed inaccuracies in the verbosity level of logs across most nodes and worked on troubleshooting for some users.
 
 ## Low level overview
 - Release of the [`mithril-client`](https://crates.io/crates/mithril-client) library crate