diff --git a/_poem.txt b/_poem.txt
index 109b0208..b28dd9ed 100644
--- a/_poem.txt
+++ b/_poem.txt
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Life is a barren field
 
 Frozen with snow.
 
-Remember as the butterflies fly away
+As the butterflies slowly fly away
 
 Life will no longer be grey.